Friday, 16 April 2010


There was a factory near a river.

They were doing well, making a lot of products.

To make these things the factory drained something bad.

A Cat fish ate these then very shocked.

He felt very sick, struggled and swimming very very first and far.

Finally he reached to the sky
He made thunders with the bad things which he ate at the river.
After the thunder, it was raining with dark rain drops.

When the rain drops hit the factory, the wall was start melting.

It was very badly melted.

The factory has destroyed by that.

The End


  1. This is really great but I've been working with water colours again so I liked your new watercolours even more.

  2. I like your little story.